Captured By Darkness (Kazumi's Critique)

[Kazumi O'Connor]

So it occurred to me that I have not put one of these up for Kazumi, which is odd given the fact that she is my main and I RP her way more than any of my other characters. To be honest, I am really interested to hear what people have to say about her, even though I know she has not been very out and about due to the lack of activity going on right now. But still, I feel that I have RPed her enough that most people should have a pretty good idea of what to think of her.

Either way, any form of comments, suggestions or constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated seeing as how I am rather fond of Kazumi and would like to make sure that I am doing her character justice.

Thanks <3

[yoyongi]

I'm still kind of confused about how she went from completely afraid of everything and stuttering like crazy to afraid of absolutely nothing and having quite an impressive vocabulary that she can flaunt relatively easily. I didn't read up on everything, so that's probably why, but I guess it just bothers me a little. That, and she does seem a little inhuman (other than having died before) being scared of nothing and being ready to take on everything. Patrick's her motivator, I realize, but it feels kind of - for lack of a better word - flat to me.

Kazumi's not a character I'm very familiar with so my opinion may be highly unfounded, so if that's the case I apologize.

[Kazumi O'Connor]

*blinks*

My Kaz? Not scared of anything?

>.>

<.<

Ummm....I admit she has her moments where she just dgaf....But then she gets that from her Mother. (And that should really not be confused with her not being scared....Cause yeah...totally different things.) But ninety percent of the time, she is scared of something, be it what she is doing, consequences of her actions, or just.....her own shadow (depending on the day).....As for her vocabulary. Hmm, as far as I know, she has always had a pretty lengthy vocabulary, she just chose to never use it before now due to her character having been kinda hidden behind other people's....As for her stammering.....yes, she had a problem with that but that was like...250 posts ago and God knows how many threads. SO much has gone on to push her past that little bout of insecurity.

But, if she is being irritating as a character then she is definitely fulfilling her role as Kevala's daughter. Mission Accomplished!!

XD

[Ryu Hikari]

Okay, because I am not doing critique posts for every single one of your threads, I'm doing them all in this one post.

Kazumi: I liked her back on Public High School #1033, and I like her here. She's sweet, timid, and maybe just a tad naive, but I can tell when it comes to her family, she'll go killer vampire on all yo asses mo fo's. Although I haven't really had too many threads with her yet (which admittedly, is my fault), I'm already looking forward to what will happen, since she has come out and pushed Nyx back for now.

Jacelyn: I have fun reading the threads she is in, her reactions and actions get a laugh out of me, and how she always hyper analyzes the things Cael does.

Kevala: She's Kevala, I've RP'ed with her a ton, you already know my opinion on her. Kaz will always love her, no matter what.

Azura: It's Azura. I play Raven. You know what I think of her.

Aryanna: I can't really say much on her, to be honest.

Cynara: She's dead. R.I.P. Cynara.