Nightmare Arc 1 Critique

[Azura]

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Yes....I am cautiously requesting feedback on this quest, at least on my end of things. Um....cause yeah, not like I have ever done anything like this before.

<.<

Any input on Azura will be welcome too....Because honestly still figuring her out exactly....

I luff you guys!!!!

<3

XD

[Legion]

I like Azura, I think she's a bit naive, but that's a good thing figuring how living your life behind walls and experiments would likely do that to you. I enjoy the depth of her character thus far, her wanting to do nothing but good, her disgust for humanity on the outside, but still her hopefulness. There's still a lot to be fleshed out but that's understandable only 53 posts in.

I liked the quest from A's side no real complaints, thought it was rather compelling.

[Raven]

Same on my end, what did you guys in Group B think of what I did?

Any feedback on Raven is welcomed too, though this is not limited to just Group B, Group A can give opinions too.

[Azura]

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HE IS TOO FUCKING HOT FOR HIS OWN GOOD!

*cough*

That is all.

*leaves*

[Ian Cross]

I enjoyed the small role Atsushi played in it, as well as the fact that Raven just pwned his shit. The two characters are honestly surprising me so far, so good job there guys.

I give it le thumbs up.

[kazue]

Besides the obvious complaint of some people just don't play fair... -looks at cael and coughs-

I thought it was fantastic. ^_^ I can also say, having seen quite a lot of quests, I'm glad you took charge to end it. I've seen quests where people lost interest cause it carried on too long and so they just stopped posting. You were also on top of what was happening and kept Azura true to her character.

As for Raven, I think he was done well too. No complaints from me about either character to be honest. For questies they are pretty well made. Not just a questie that shows up "BOOM I HATE YOU!" and then dissapears forever when beaten. I quite enjoyed the Quest too. Even if my girls had their asses handed to them. Taylor more so than Kazue. lol

[Cael Seran]

I had fun, Apologies to Autumn for using Taylor like a ragdoll but yeah wishing I'd have been a bit more actively involved. Again this is mostly just my fault, no real critique other than my own faults.